Our new topic in class is Anzac (ww1). Since I have started this topic I have already learned a lot about it like William Ham was the first NZ soldier to die. For one of the activates we had to write a letter from a soldiers perspective to home.
Hi Oliver Thank you for sharing your writing. I am so please that you are learning so many new things. Do you think that you would be able to change the settings of your embedded letter so that it is easier to read? Miss H :-)
Hi Oliver name is Cameron from kaingaroa school. i like your letter to the soldiers i like how your talk about the Gallipoli war. plus you have good punctuation and including capital letters and full stops.
Hi Oliver
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing. I am so please that you are learning so many new things. Do you think that you would be able to change the settings of your embedded letter so that it is easier to read?
Miss H :-)
Hi Oliver name is Cameron from kaingaroa school. i like your letter to the soldiers i like how your talk about the Gallipoli war. plus you have good punctuation and including capital letters and full stops.
ReplyDeleteHi Cameron
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